Searching for the lips that sang the song
of deep passionate love,
of deep passionate love,
I saw the bright pearl floating away,
and everything else felt worth losing.
Without turning around
to see what ive lost on my way,
i followed the addicting song
and took the pearl in my hands.
Deep in my heart, i sowed
feeding it day and night
with my love, joy and care.
I let my heart dance
at the rhythm of its song,
my dreams grew around it.
But i heard its voice tremble
in my smothering embrace.
Why didn’t i know, all this time
that the song was not sung for me.
had a small problem with the “pearrl floating away”..pear..does not float. does it?
I let my heart dance
at the rhythm of its song,
my dreams grew around it.
But i heart its voice tremble
in my smothering embrace.
Why didn’t i know, all this time
that the song was not sung for me.
thiese were awesome!!\m/ u meant heard right??
he only heard the song of the pearl n it felt like floating away.. thatsy
n yeah, it was heard. sorry for the typo.. have changed it. Thanks for letting me know
Thanks a lot for the outstanding OWL
Nicely written..You take the reader to a strange and forgotten space..Amazing piece of work..Following a song not sung for you is a sad experience..I too give an outstanding OWL
thanks a lot
I hope these are just trends of ur thought!
painful!
but touching!
haha.. they are
real life is much more tough, i shd say.
hii Amal
nice, very nice and touching…esp the last line… keep writing such wonderful poems