He slammed the door shut and stormed out. A warm smile waited for him outside. All his sorrows died away and a cool breeze swept through his heart. Smilingly he got into the cab with her.
Peeking through the bedroom window, a small girl asked a teary pair of eyes
“Where is daddy going, mamma?”
The Question
On August - 11 - 2009
@ Aditi
yeah.. its hard for the kids as well
@ Saurabh
thanks buddy
i was kinda busy
Is that all?
Very touching. Felt so inadequate some how, can't express…we always end up hurting the children the most when a relationship sours.
Truly beautiful.
hmhm–
that was quite disturbing….
strong n short ..nice
No posts of late…whats up?
@ Diya
its a 55 fiction..
@ Aparna
the word restriction was the reason..
thanks for the comment
You really know to explain a million things in hardly few lines .Great !!
Loved it. Though painful.. but you captured the essence in just 55 words.. thats remarkable.